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Love in USA #1 : A Martha's Vineyard Love Story

Belmont (Jack) and Daisy fall in love and then they have sex. Lots and lots of sex. The book was way too horny for me. There were a few cheesy lines here and there, which I love but other than that, nothing. And it is very cliché. Some girl tries to kiss Jack and that's the exact moment Daisy enters who is already pissed at him and this gives her the perfect excuse to dump his sorry ass and run away without giving him a chance to explain.
See, this is what I call lousy writing. You can't think of any new drama, then use the traditional boring scenarios that we very well know. Minus points for that. But honestly after past 2-3 encounters with absolutely disgusting reads, I was pretty happy with this one. But that was just my tortured soul reaching out. When I thought about it clearly, it really wasn't all that good . What I liked was knowing about Martha's Vineyard, the description of the surroundings and the facts about the weddings was nice. I sure wanna visit it now. But what wasn't nice was the love story. It was weird. Even weird according to fiction standards. The guys seemed crazy. And there wasn't anything except sex. Day, night every single moment.
I am going to rate this a 5/10.
PS. It is availablefor free on Amazon.

Till the next one ...
Xoxo

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